{"id":19320,"date":"2015-08-08T23:05:54","date_gmt":"2015-08-09T06:05:54","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/?p=19320"},"modified":"2015-08-14T23:57:52","modified_gmt":"2015-08-15T06:57:52","slug":"036a","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/036a\/","title":{"rendered":"The making of <em>The Bolar Wars Extended<\/em><br>Part 6"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-880 alt=\"1508icon\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/wp-content\/uploads\/1508icon.jpg\" width=\"216\" height=\"90\" \/><\/p>\n<p class=\"cosmo-teaser\">In the final part, we examine various concepts that <em>might<\/em> have been part of <em>Yamato III<\/em> if it ran its full length, and <em>might<\/em> have been part of the webcomic if we found a place for them. In the end, they became imaginative tidbits without a home &#8211; except for those that found their way into <em>Yamato 2199<\/em>&#8230;<\/p>\n<div style=\"clear: both;\"><\/div>\n<p><!--more--><!--noteaser--><\/p>\n<h1>More Unused Story Ideas<\/h1>\n<p><span class=\"image-left\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a13.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><br \/>\n<em>Top: Galman capital city design by Yutaka Izubuchi for<\/em><br \/>\nYamato III. <em>Bottom: Garmillas capital city design by<br \/>\nKazutaka Miyatake for<\/em> Yamato 2199.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>We end this series of making-ofs with more flotsam and jetsam. When translation of the Japanese <em>Yamato III<\/em> story notes was completed, it was easy to see right up front which ideas would not help us tell the story of the unproduced episodes &#8211; they were also discarded from the anime series. So they were peeled off the top of the pile and collected <a href='https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/373'>here<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>This followup collection was less easy to discard, because all of it was intended to be part of the unproduced episodes at some level. We have no way of knowing which of these would have remained intact or which were due for further development, but as we worked to find the essence of <em>The Bolar Wars Extended<\/em>, we carved them away one by one. Also presented here is some interesting design geneology.<\/p>\n<h2>Segments from the 52-episode plotline<\/h2>\n<p>We might have been able to do something with these concepts if we had more to go on, but in each case the text shown here was all we could find\u2026<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Episodes 29 &#038; 30: Singing of the castaways<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\">A crew member in the communications section is in distress; rescue or advance? <em>Yamato<\/em> rescues the sufferer.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>This sounded like one of those Space Siren stories &#8211; a crew member insists that they&#8217;re hearing voices and everyone else has to decide if they&#8217;re nuts. Good fodder if you&#8217;re looking for a character-building episode, but not much relevance to the big picture.<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Eps 31-33: Great interplanetary war<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\">Planet investigated by a human team; cross XX kilometers into enemy territory; escape.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-right\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a12.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><br \/>\n<em>Top: Galman city-ship concept by Yutaka Izubuchi for<\/em><br \/>\nYamato III. <em>Bottom: Second Balerus city-ship from<\/em><br \/>\nYamato 2199<\/span><\/p>\n<p><em>Yamato<\/em>&#8216;s search for a second Earth became less important to the plot as the series went on, but once in a while we were reminded that it was a thing. It would have come back to front and center if these episodes were made. Presumably, a likely planet would be found in Bolar territory and the drama would be about rescuing the expeditionary team once this problem was discovered. Unfortunately, a way to weave this into the larger narrative did not suggest itself.<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\">Eps 39 &#038; 40: Black Hole<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\">Departure of the first emigration ship to wait in space; the emigration ship is swallowed by a black hole.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>It would have been interesting to spend some time with the people on Earth waiting for the discovery of a new home. What would life be like from day to day? What if you were lucky enough to get a ticket on the first ride out? What if you didn&#8217;t know where your ship would eventually end up? How would you feel about leaving people behind to bake on Earth while you&#8217;re cooped up in an air-conditioned cabin? And most importantly, how could your captain be dumb enough or unlucky enough to run the ship into a black hole? That last part sort of ruined it.<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\">Eps 41 &#038; 42: Last planet<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\">Visit the last planet on the exploration project; desperation; fight Kaihyo people.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-left\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a11.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><br \/>\n<em>Early design for Planet Shalbart<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><em>Yamato<\/em> did actually visit the last planet on their list in Episode 23, where they found the wreckage of <em>Arizona<\/em> and got drawn into a battle in the Skalagek Star Cluster. But we never found an explanation of who or what the Kaihyo people were supposed to be. It&#8217;s possible that this concept eventually evolved into Episode 23, but evidence is elusive.<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\">Eps 43 &#038; 44: Wandering voyage<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Yamato<\/em> runs out of fuel, drifts; <em>Yamato<\/em> rouses itself after Aihara is punished.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>A number of backflips would have been needed to make this idea work. First, we have no prior evidence of <em>Yamato<\/em> running on actual fuel. We first saw something like this early in Series 1 when the ship stopped at Titan, but ever since then it was assumed that the Wave-Motion Engine generates an inexhaustible amount of energy. And if anyone was responsible for it, Aihara (Homer) seems like the last likely candidate. It&#8217;s more likely that this was a &#8220;placeholder&#8221; idea for a character story centering on him. We saw no obvious way to make it work, so it was dropped.<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<div class='clear'>\n<h2>Discarded story notes<\/h2>\n<p>This material came from the same body of work that gave us the plot elements to construct the webcomic story. These are the concepts that, for one reason or another, didn&#8217;t find an anchor point.<\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"textBlue\">Opening narration<\/em><\/span><\/h3>\n<p>Opening narration emphasizes a long great voyage into the unknown, encounters with strange beings. But we understand nature, it is the same everywhere.<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-left\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a10.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><br \/>\n<em>Designs by Yutaka Izubuchi<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"textBlue\">I: Strategy and Tactics<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Yamato<\/em>&#8216;s fighting capacity<\/span><\/p>\n<p>In addition to the existing weapons and equipment, an overhaul is carried out.<\/p>\n<p>First, since it is necessary to investigate some destinations in advance of <em>Yamato<\/em>&#8216;s arrival, small intelligence satellites (directly linked to <em>Yamato<\/em>&#8216;s main computer) will be dispatched ahead of the ship. Since the distances could be up to thousands of light years, these small satellites must have warp capacity or have to be sent by warp transportation. The satellites will conduct basic investigations of planets to determine whether or not humans can survive there.<\/p>\n<p>Gathering intelligence for an area to which <em>Yamato<\/em> is heading is a crucial issue. Through computerized networks of these satellites, <em>Yamato<\/em> is able to increase its intelligence-gathering capacity and its exploratory scope by thousands of times.<\/p>\n<h3>Battle Plans<\/h3>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>A: Ground Combat<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Galman descent troops vs. <em>Yamato<\/em>\/space cavalry\/Cosmo Panzers<\/p>\n<p>1. Urban combat in city ruins: armor vs. tanks. <em>Yamato<\/em> side uses terrain well.<\/p>\n<p>2. Tank battle in desert: image of North Africa in WWII (good for Galman vs. Bolar)<\/p>\n<p>3. Galman descent troops attack Earth while <em>Yamato<\/em> is at Shalbart; take over to wait for them to return with Ruda.<\/p>\n<p>4. EDF forces hide in underground cities and emerge to conduct surprise attacks<\/p>\n<p>(Note: these two items presupposed a hot war between Dessler and Earth. It would probably have looked a lot like the Dark Nebula invasion from <em>Be Forever<\/em>.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-right\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a08.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><br \/>\n<em>Concept sketch for a reflex gun<br \/>\non an asteroid<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>B: Underwater Battle<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>1. Struggle against Bolar in sea of high pressure on Metan, or in the gasses of Jupiter. Energy weapons would ignite gasses<\/p>\n<p>2. Fight against &#8216;Silent Service&#8217; on a water planet. A space fleet prevents <em>Yamato<\/em> from flying away. Maybe it could warp out from an atmosphere, a very risky move.<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>C: Space Battle in Asteroid Belt<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>1. A fleet deploys and fires using asteroids as cover, like hiding and popping out to fire in a Western<\/p>\n<p>2. reflector satellites mounted on asteroids to shoot around corners into hiding places<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-right\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a09.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><br \/>\n<em>Someone who didn&#8217;t make the cut:<br \/>\nElite Security General Darkunas<br \/>\n(unused character from Series 1)<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Battle Ideas<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>1. S-Boat\/gunboat corps<br \/>\n2. Galman ground troops vs. <em>Yamato<\/em> &#038; Cosmo Panzers<br \/>\n3. EDF absolute defense line: defensive war between Earth, Bolar &#038; Galmans at Alpha Centauri, Ross, and Barnard (the Sagittarius arm of Milky Way)<\/p>\n<p>Earth fleet: <em>Andromeda<\/em>-type ships<br \/>\nBolar: Giant space fortress<br \/>\nGalman: Parent fleet &#038; space corps<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<div class='clear'>\n<h3><span class=\"textBlue\">II: Space Battles<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>The Case of Reichsmarshall Kerling<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Named for Hermann Goering (1893-1946)<br \/>\nChanged to Keeling<\/p>\n<p>Reichsmarshal Kerling, the supreme commander of the Gamilus Space Force, is overly fond of showy displays and prefers grand tactics that overwhelm the enemy with brute force. He cannot tolerate defeat, and to preserve his unbroken record of victory, he never takes a risk. He commands from the rear, in a gigantic battleship escorted by guard ships equipped with Dessler cannons.<\/p>\n<p>Kerling&#8217;s fleet is large enough to patrol the whole galaxy, but because of its unwieldy size, orders often do not effectively reach the smaller units. Ironically, this creates conditions for confusion<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-left\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a07.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Fight in a developing star cluster<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>&#8211; a region of dust and debris where stars and planets are forming<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; dark red, swirling &#038; boiling gases<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; <em>Yamato<\/em> vs. S-Boats (Dimensional Submarines)<\/p>\n<p>(If that sounds a bit like <em>Yamato 2199<\/em> <a href='https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/020a'>Episode 13<\/a> to you, that&#8217;s because it does.)<\/p>\n<p><\/br><\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<div class='clear'>\n<h3><span class=\"textBlue\">III: Special Weapons<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Dimensional Wave-Motion Missiles<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>These powerful interstellar missiles use Wave-Motion energy, employing a conventional nuclear bomb as the trigger. It instantly annihilates all life at the impact point and creates dimensional shock waves which destroy anything in the surrounding area, up to and including planets. A smaller version of this weapon can be used in ship-to-ship battles, and can easily wipe out an enemy formation even when detonating tens of thousands of kilometers away.<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-right\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a06.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><br \/>\n<em>Galman orbital weapon design, Yutaka Izubuchi<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>(Note: both the Galman and Bolar sides had planet-killing missiles, but they certainly didn&#8217;t spend much time explaining how they worked.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Dimension Vibration\/Seismic Gun<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Galman weapon, improvement over Wave-Motion Gun. Causes dimensional vibration over a wide area, disruption at atomic level<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Neutron Missiles (Gamilas)<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>This is a weapon suited to the ideology of Gamilas, which claims to &#8220;cleanse&#8221; space by annihilating &#8220;inferior&#8221; races. This weapon kills all living creatures on a planet, leaving it reusable for Gamilas.<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Battle Planet<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Automated battle planet; computer-controlled defenses (Note: probably the basis for the Gurakens.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-left\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a05.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><br \/>\n<em>Early design for Planet Bolar<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Planet Nation Zeni (alt. name &#8216;Boshi&#8217;)<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>A Bolar ally, fighting the Galmans. A superior industrial power, located in a densely-packed star region. Builds battle planets.<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Solar Missile<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>A missile group that explodes simultaneously to create an explosion the size of a small sun.<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Bolar Cyborg Soldier<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Made for battle in any environment. Sad soldiers, have no blood or tears.<\/p>\n<p>(Note: since this idea helped drive <em>Be Forever<\/em>, a Bolar cyborg would hopefully have covered different ground.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-right\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a04.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Android Soldier<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Humanoid robot deployed by Galmans for combat in any environment.<\/p>\n<p>(Note: In <em>Yamato 2199<\/em>, they were called Garmilloids.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Space Combat Armor<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Various weapons types, increases strength of the wearer. Makes a person equal to a tank. Infantrymen in Galman Paratroopers.<\/p>\n<p>(Note: powered armor was certainly a staple of anime, though we hadn&#8217;t seen many of them when these notes were written in 1980. Nevertheless, it never really felt like a good fit for <em>Yamato<\/em>.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Descent Armored Division (Galman Panzers)<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Elite unit of Galman; combination of paratroopers and German tank unit. Used for Planetary invasion under General Gaidel.<\/p>\n<p>(Note: obviously, this note inspired the Tank Paratroopers in <em>Ren &#038; Stimpy<\/em>. There can be no other explanation.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-left\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a03.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><br \/>\n<em>Manga panel by Akira Hio, 1974<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Cosmo Panzers (Earth&#8217;s EDF tank division)<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Space tanks, can operate in vacuum; installed on <em>Yamato<\/em>?<\/p>\n<p>(Note: <em>Yamato<\/em> tanks? Believe it or not, it wasn&#8217;t the first time the idea came up. Akira Hiyo had a tank corps in his manga adaptation of Series 1. They made their first appearance while attacking the Pluto base.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Ghost Transportation Machine<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Psychological weapon used against <em>Yamato<\/em> to create visions.<\/p>\n<p>(Note: this was another previously-seen concept from Akira Hiyo&#8217;s manga, which was based on an unproduced Series 1 episode in which the crew were subjected to a psychic attack. This idea later became the basis for <em>Yamato 2199<\/em> <a href='https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/037a'>Episode 14<\/a>. The closest they got to it in <em>Yamato III<\/em> was Planet Phantom.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-right\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a02.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><br \/>\n<em>Dengil torpedo ship from<\/em> Final Yamato,<em> by Tsuji Tadanao<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Space Torpedo Squadron<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>A long-range torpedo boat attack unit.<\/p>\n<p>(Note: while we didn&#8217;t see anything like this in <em>Yamato III<\/em>, the Dengil fleet definitely had them in <em>Final Yamato<\/em>.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Space Bombing Corps\/Galman<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Long distance planetary air raids, like B29s.<\/p>\n<p>(Note: something else we saw when the Dengil raided the solar system in <em>Final Yamato<\/em>.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Cloaking Device<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Covert action, hidden from radar screens.<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<div class='clear'>\n<h3><span class=\"textBlue\">IV: Characters<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>New leader of EDF fleet<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>like Hijikata (Gideon).<\/p>\n<p>(Note: we all would have liked to see another fleet commander step into Hijikata&#8217;s shoes, but chances are very good he wouldn&#8217;t have survived to the end of the story. There&#8217;s not much security in that job.)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Galman Hawk<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>An ace pilot, has a dogfight against Kodai in the Cosmo Zero.<\/p>\n<p>(Note: there was a Galman Wolf, why not a Galman Hawk? Or, for that matter, a Melda Dietz?)<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"image-left\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault-images\/aug15\/036a01.JPG\" border=\"0\" \/><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textBrown\"><em>Star Force Crew<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>&#8216;Thunderbolt&#8217; Goro (Navigation section)<\/p>\n<p>Graduated from Space Soldier Academy as a sports champ (wrestling, etc). Sets himself up as Shima&#8217;s bodyguard.<\/p>\n<p>(Note: this description perfectly suits Goro Raiden [Buster Block], but he never had an opportunity to bodyguard Shima. Who would he guard against?)<\/p>\n<h3>The End<\/h3>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-19320","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/19320","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=19320"}],"version-history":[{"count":16,"href":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/19320\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":19500,"href":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/19320\/revisions\/19500"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=19320"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=19320"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ourstarblazers.com\/vault\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=19320"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}